The new Animatic is up in Dropbox, under the public folder as ANIMATIC_COMPRESSED2_newending01.mov
It has no sound since I'm still going to change it.
Have a look and tell me what you think. I think it needs work and I'm looking to change the ending again and bring the childhood friend in at the end - still, glad to have any input and ideas at all with this current version. Shoot away in the comments.
Currently it's confusing what happens at the end: - OFFICER comes in, lifts up KAT, OFFICER walks off screen, KAT shoots and reloads, ejecting a cartridge onto PHOTO, fighting is heard off screen, KAT is hit off screen, drops his rifle and falls on the PHOTO and camera.
ReplyDeleteAt the moment it looks like the officer shoots him.
The new ending I have in mind is: KAT is on the floor, OFFICER comes in, KAT tries to gesture OFFICER to stay down, OFFICER tries to lift KAT but KAT stays down, OFFICER is then hit and falls to the ground, revealing himself as KAT'S OLD FRIEND. End.
I want the ending to be snappy so as not to detract from the waving moment, which is a risk, but as far as endings go at least it's kinda concludes. Tell me whatcha think.